April 23, 2017 - mh9868a
Office Hours 2
The next time I went to office hours with Professor Hoskins was to talk about the redo for Essay 1. I was really lost because the original essay I submitted was pretty bad. Honestly, I did not know how to recover from the original essay. So, I went in and asked about where I went wrong with the first essay, and how I could improve for the redo. I ended up deciding to scrape most of my first essay, but I did decide to analyze BGR’s website again. This meeting was very helpful because it put me on the right track for my Essay 1 Redo.