April 24, 2017 - mh9868a
Office Hours 4
I went to office hours on Monday to discuss my essay one redo. I was very nervous because I had worked on it a lot and thought it was an improvement on my first essay 1 attempt. However, I was still weary of my redo because I was worried I was making the same mistakes I made the first time. So, I went in, and Professor Hoskins looked at my paper. It turns out I was still doing my ‘they say’ incorrectly, and, because the ‘they say’ was wrong, my entire argument was still not very sound. He tried to explain different ways to execute a ‘they say,’ but I ended up leaving the session more confused than I was when I got there.