On January 26th, we had a writing workshop on our Introduction sections of our final papers in class. I think this was an important step in my progress this semester, as I got to apply what I had talked about with Dr. Field in our Jan. 19th meeting in the introduction. However, I still did not come up with the quality of work that I really wanted. I feel as though I received a lot of help from my peers in figuring out what I need to do to make it a better introduction. Additionally, even though I got these comments later, I feel as though Dr. Field’s comments are also highly instrumental in getting my work to where it needs to be for my final paper.